In the picture above we can see that three characters have been created within the first page and we are given s short description on each. Each description contains outer presence, inner presence and context.
In the first section we can see that MARTHA is introduced as another face in the crowd and we get a little bit of inner presence from this and some context of the location around her from the sentence above.
TISH is introduced with a heavy amount of inner presence, it tells us that she is always late and her home is a mess; again we have more inner presence and context.
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