IN CERTAIN AREAS, THIS IS A REALLY GOOD FIRST DRAFT; YOU HAVE COVERED THE TERMS AND WRITTEN WELL ABOUT THEM IN YOUR DEFINITIONS BUT YOU ARE LACKING EXAMPLES AND THIS STOPS YOU FROM GETTING ANYTHING ABOUT A PASS.
GO THROUGH THE SLIDES AND ADD AT LEAST ONE EXAMPLE (AND AN IMAGE/CLIP) FOR EVERYTHING YOU HAVE DEFINED.
APOLOGIES ABOUT THE CAPS BUT I ONLY JUST NOTICED AND AM NOT PREPARED TO TYPE THIS OUT AGAIN!
JACK,
ReplyDeleteIN CERTAIN AREAS, THIS IS A REALLY GOOD FIRST DRAFT; YOU HAVE COVERED THE TERMS AND WRITTEN WELL ABOUT THEM IN YOUR DEFINITIONS BUT YOU ARE LACKING EXAMPLES AND THIS STOPS YOU FROM GETTING ANYTHING ABOUT A PASS.
GO THROUGH THE SLIDES AND ADD AT LEAST ONE EXAMPLE (AND AN IMAGE/CLIP) FOR EVERYTHING YOU HAVE DEFINED.
APOLOGIES ABOUT THE CAPS BUT I ONLY JUST NOTICED AND AM NOT PREPARED TO TYPE THIS OUT AGAIN!
GOOD START JACK,.
ELLIEB
Still lacking examples but you've discussed the technology, pass achieved.
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